

Then I realized it was just me and Miles.Īnd another gem at basically the very beginning: Here's some of those awkward first-story gems: Don't get me wrong, my little cup-Kate, I'm extremely glad that there isn't a love triangle anymore (although you either purposefully or accidentally decided to hint at Luce with Cam again in the Rapture excerpt shoot me now ) between them, but it was just bad. The whole romance with Shelby and Miles was so awkward, not well-written and ain old shit. To be blunt with you, dearest, it really was not good.

Let's go over your first story in this little four-story headache extravaganza.

Be expecting the medical bill from the hospital either also inclosed inside this envelope or as a later package a couple of days after. Your lawn mower never even got off the ground it kind of wobbled off into the air just a little bit, but when you had your excerpt of Rapture in there it just exploded into a fiery blaze. Sad to say that you tried, and you failed. I think that the lawn mower really makes the scene. You were trying to follow that old saying:

Passion was the worst book of this series to date before this book was published, in my honest opinion, and I believe that Fallen In Love was your honest attempt at rectifying the train wreck that your last book was. I regret to inform you that your writing has gone all-out bipolar on us all, and this book is prime evidence of that fact. My dearest Lauren Kate my honey-bun, my up-and-downer my peach, I feel as if we have grown.so much closer over this series. Post-review: I feel like, after reading almost all of this series, now, including the in-between book that I was in no way obligated to read, I am allowed to write a letter.
